Proof-Readers wanted!

[Bamy]

I wrote a short story about a little mouse's birthday party. It is meant for young children so don't expect anything too complex but I would really like some feedback. I really would like to get this published in the near future. I will be adding colour sketches and the odd colour picture to complement the story so it will not be just the story alone that goes to the publishers I know the story alone would definitely not accepted. Like I said, proof readers andconstructive omments would be VERY gratefully recieved.

If you would like to proof read the story send me a PM and I will send you the story to look through.


Thankyou:D

[Bamy]

Oh and I forgot to add that the story is only two and a bit A4 pages long.

[Th'ann'deki]

I wrote a short story about a little mouse's birthday party. It is meant for young children so don't expect anything too complex but I would really like some feedback. I really would like to get this published in the near future. I will be adding colour sketches and the odd colour picture to complement the story so it will not be just the story alone that goes to the publishers I know the story alone would definitely not accepted. Like I said, proof readers andconstructive omments would be VERY gratefully recieved.

If you would like to proof read the story send me a PM and I will send you the story to look through.


Thankyou:D
Hi, Amy B, I've been a professional writer for many years and have published several short stories. I'm happy to help. Please contact me through this website. Regards, Th'ann'deki