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silver dragon
28th February 2005, 09:54 PM
Well 'The story of Kitarna' is my first go at this so be as honest and brutal as you like it's all welcome. :D :fiend:
maiken
28th February 2005, 10:00 PM
Well...you leave off kind of abrubtly. I want more! Will give more feedback when I read more than just the end of the story. :roll: :evil: :shhh:
silver dragon
28th February 2005, 10:05 PM
Well...you leave off kind of abrubtly. I want more! Will give more feedback when I read more than just the end of the story. :roll: :evil: :shhh:


HUH!!!!!! there's 11 chapters there so far. I've only just finished chapter 11 :blush: Kinda got writers block for a while :D Will start Chap 12 soon :D
maiken
28th February 2005, 10:26 PM
Not a problem, though I still want more! :bouncy:
silver dragon
28th February 2005, 10:33 PM
Not a problem, though I still want more! :bouncy:


ok will do soon :D
K'vin
1st March 2005, 03:22 AM
Great story so far but I would like to hear more about Karla.