My first songs/poems/stories on here!

[queenrider melody]

Hi! I was just wonderingwhat you thought of My Fair and Me, Don't Offend, and any other future works of mine. Please, be honest! I can take it!

[queenrider melody]

I'd really appreciate feedback here, please!

[Priscilla]

I really like the poem about Criticism, and I hope it doesn't apply to how you've been treated at this site! I agree with the points in it, about how some people come down hard on others, especially if they find out the person is young, or if the person isn't as far along in their education. Everyone has something to contribute, and for myself, my best writing came when I was in my late teens, early twenties.

[queenrider melody]

Thanks, Priscilla. I really do write poems best outside things I've read, but things that have happened to me. But I can't resist writing Fandom poems! I myself am just south of thirteen.

[Priscilla]

Just read the one about the past and family history. Boy, did that hit home to me! Family! You can't pick them, that's why I choose my friends pretty carefully! :ok:

[pern_queen_rider]

I love "Shawant's Miricale(SP?)"

Lovely story in the making there.

[queenrider melody]

Thanks, PQR.