The Dangerous Life of Spirits of Time and Many People.

[maiken]

My 10yearold sis wanted me to post this somewhere and this is where I decided to do it.

Let her know what you think, and remember, she is only 10. Also, feedback will go in the thread I am making in the Feedback Forum.

[maiken]

The Dangerous Life of The Spirits of Time and many people

By Brianna Wilson




Chapter One Introduction and a long path to freedom




One day a young boy named Tempest was on his way to a market. The year was an unknown date and the planet none like any other. The planet’s many landscapes were varied and few had been explored. But Tempest was not very happy not knowing what was out farther than the town of Bendentington.
Tempest dreamed of exploring all landscapes of the planet he lived on, Feraneth. As he aged and grew his kind mother would still say it was too dangerous, even though his sister and him both were eighteen, and wanted to leave. Fillidaliphia, his mother, wanted Natilly, his sister, and him to grow up and take the family business of being seamstresses or be loyal to the king and queen, otherwise being their servants.
Tempest bought some fish and rice and was on his way. His mother had no idea her son and daughter would run off and have some adventures of their own. He planed the escape.
Fillidallphia, their mother, fixed diner for her family and the royalty. She looked as if she was sickly because she was very tired and got little rest. In her childhood, unknown to Tempest and Natilly, she had wandered off and got married, making her as miserable as she was today.
Expecting Tempest to arrive soon, Filladalphia brought some water in so she could start the water to boil. When Tempest arrived, she put the fish in the boiling water. She asked Tempest about why he had been so long to get a simple fish. He replied, “I got some extra money from my pay check…………and………” “And what!!!!!” she asked. “And I bought us some rice!! Yes something more than one fish for all three of us.” His mother looked angry. “But Mother! You must understand! We aren’t being greedy the king is!” he exclaimed. ‘GO TO YOUR ROOM!’ is what he expected to hear, but instead his mother cried tears of joy and said, “You are right.! We will escape tonight.!”
Later that evening they went supposedly to bed, but they were packing things that were most dear to them. Soon their journey would begin. But their story would not end here. Not a chance it would end now! Or so they thought.
Later that night, they were off Bendentington’s grounds. Soon their first adventure would begin. They would cross the lake to unknown land and they would be free! Free at last! They were silent as they walked and were about to cross the lake, when guards stood in their way.
Natilly wielded a sword so she could fight through them and would not have any trouble. They sped strait through the guards and across the river. At last they were free forever.
Soon they made it to a forest and a clearing. They decided to set up camp and sleep the rest of the night. The trio would sleep the rest of the night but wake up early enough to still be able to have a meal.
Tempest asked, “Should I fish for food for morning? Did you bring the rice?” Filidallphia replied, “Yes, you should, and yes I did.” Natilly, who never since she was five, or before had freedom to speak said, “What shall I do? Or am I aloud to do any thing. Shall I be aloud to help, please?” In shock, Tempest and Filadallphia said at the same time, “You can get water. Two buckets please. One to drink and one to boil.” So the trio went to do what they were told to do.




Soon they would be able to sleep all of the nights all night, but they could not now. It soon would be nightfall and the three moons of the sand would arrive and fall later. Then the two suns of the phonics would arise for the first time in two years like they always did. They always switched with the single moon of the fire knight. The moons did not switch. But very few new about this and did not notice the different suns and did not think anything about the second sun even being there.
Later that night, they were all asleep. They awoke at sunrise. They did not know that Bendentington’s borders were moving toward them. They noticed and ran for their freedom! They could not lose it now! Not after coming this far!
They ran until that night, after the border stopped moving and they were one hundred miles away. They started to chant a song at night. “May freedom ring, throughout the skies, and not bring, so many lies, lies of lives, lives of lies, you cant bring knives, still everyone dies, this may not seem right, this may not seem wrong, you look at the knight, all brave and strong, still that’s not the point, I am the knight, no crazy point, not wrong or right, I still cry tears, I still tell lies, and in many years, another tries, so what’s the point you ask, why do you sleep at night, I must for fill a task, it may not be wrong or right, may freedom ring, where I fought, and may I sing, of what I brought, soon I’ll be free, just like you, all happy with glee, a free spirit too.”
And then they slept in peace the whole night. They were safe. They had accomplished what no servant had ever before. They were heroes.

Meanwhile, at the king’s castle, the queen screamed at the top of her lungs, “YOU STUPID IMBECILE!! I TOLD YOU TO TREAT THEM BETTER, but ‘nooo’ you said. I BANISH HIM FROM MY PRESENCE FOREVER AND WISH TO NEVER SEE HIM AGAIN!!!!! Guards!!” The king was sent to the other castle and was not seen for days.

Chapter two A New Beginning





A creature who appeared to be a little girl slowly glided along the sky’s clouds. She was not a little girl, but a Time Spirit. Her name was Timephia, but people called her Time. She controlled all of time and did not have care in the world. In fact, she had been a child for a thousand years.
Time had an adopted mother named Victoria. Victoria had a privilege of being a resident of Kiliakai, a nilinilia, the capital city of Feraneth, and was a Multi millionaire, and had been since she was one year old. Time was born from a grain of sand from a secret desert called The Time Ilison Desert. She rarely spoke to any one because several people did not have freedom to speak. But now as said in the first chapter, they now had freedom to speak.
Time had a sister who she was adopted to the family of, and a brother. Her sister was kind and her name was Zoe. Her brother was not so kind and his name was Leanardo. She had a house maid who was Time’s only friend, named Kaisoa. Time did not know that she would soon meet the trio.

Filidallphia led the way, Natilly carried the rice and a tune, and Tempest carried the heavy things. Filidallphia said, “Civilization is ahead. Prepare your selves.” They would be safe if they made a house and became citizens there.
So they went to Victoria, who happened to be the main citizen. They were allowed to be citizens, under one condition, they had to build their own house. They would be safe as long as they had the citizenship in a different town.
They’re just now free forever. Victoria read aloud as she wrote, “Citizen Filidallphia Manona, Citizen Natilly Manona, and Citizen Tempust Manona”
They built the house and slept the night. They would not be awoke by danger ever again. Or so they thought.
They chanted a different chant that night. “ the trees may take, many years, in order to make, very few tears, but the point is not just days, I wished it would last forever, but in many ways, it some will not last the weather, but the point is that many years, will not last forever, but many of your tears, will not last the year of never.” The story of the freedom knights has a new beginning.




Chapter Three The Years



Several years had passed and very few people knew about a little girl named Violet. She was known as a Shadow Spawn. She had dark black hair and had her own problems. She did not have the freedom to live on her own, but ran off years before the trio. She had lived through many battles even though she was barely thirteen. Violet came too many houses but no one would let her in to have a home and she was too young to live on her own. She had a way of accidentally creating vortexes that attracted every thing to them. She had no way to control them. Violet loved to ride in carriages.

[Shazza]

Maiken, it's a lovely idea that you posted this for your sister, however this forum is for your OWN work only. Please tell your sister we would be glad to have her as a member and do stick to posting only your own work in future.

[Time Spirit]

I'm sorry. I'm mai's sister. I'll continue it from here. Mom wanted mai to post it for me so that I didn't have to register for anything on the internet, and she said she would, so ....sorry.

This is my first board ive ever registered for! :bouncy:

[Sassie]

Well done Time Spirit,
You have a wonderful imagination and a real sense of story telling,
I hope you keep writing your own stories
And enjoy the worlds you create for yourself and share with others.....
Always remember...
There are no barriers in Books...
So let your mind run free.....

It's nice to see you in this forum!!! :ok:

A little tip
If you have Microsoft Word, open it up and leave on a blank page, then use the tools in the right corner to put it down on the ‘open bar’ at the bottom of your screen.
Then….
When you’ve finished putting on a story, before you post it, right click and go to ‘select all’ then ‘copy’ on your highlighted story.
Go to the bottom of your screen and open your Word Doc, right click and paste….
Then your story will come up on the Doc and it will help you to see your spelling mistakes and you can edit your story until your happy with it, when you want to take it back to the ‘post’ Just go to ‘Edit on your top tool bar and again ‘select all’ and then ‘copy’.
Click on the NKT on your bottom bar, that will bring up your original story (It will still be highlighted) you can wipe this by hitting your top return (Step back a letter key,) Then all you have to do is right click and ‘Paste and your edited story will appear all ready for posting!!!
I do this all the time so that I don’t post all my spelling mistakes…Even at my age…(Lets just say I’m quite old enough to be your Mom!!!)
I’m sure your Sister will help you with this, it is a bit of a cheat but it’s one way to edit your stories because your original story is still on the post board!!!! :wave: :wave: :wave:

[maiken]

Removed at Father's demand. Sorry. :blush: Time can't come on anymore. Dad wasn't too happy..... :banghead: