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Time Spirit
28th March 2005, 11:21 PM
This a story I wrote, I would like your feedback on it. Uh, I worked very hard on it, *laugh laugh* *crack up* *double crack up* :roll: Um, I don't know...this is my first feedback place. Ummm....*laugh* JUST READ IT ALREADY! *crack up* Um..hm...*laugh* *crack up* So here is where to post your thoughts on my story. It is not finished, it is not finished, I put moons instead of sun in one place, that is why it isn't finished. *laugh* *crack up* *like and egg* :box: *crack up* :banghead: Mai is typing everything I say! Stop typing everything Mai!!!!!!!!

<--Note from Mai--> I typed this for her..lol! She can't type worth a hoot.. :2cent: :redfruit:

maiken
28th March 2005, 11:37 PM
I liked it! :razz: