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Brenda
16th June 2005, 10:59 PM
That was great! Led up to the fact that the body was invisible, although I was beginning to suspect - and I love the last line! "What body? I didn't see any body."

RobinBradbery
17th June 2005, 04:23 AM
Thanks. I haven't seen anymore of this story so I assume it's done. You never know though. Sometimes these things reveal themselves in installments but I think thats all there is.

T'ley
17th June 2005, 11:23 AM
Great story loved it.
I'd like to see how it develops.

Brenda
17th June 2005, 04:39 PM
I don't think you need to do anything more with this. The government people took the body away - like MIB or X Files. Your character is out of the picture. It closes nicely.