My go at Zainal and Kris

[jinnjinn]

Well here's a rough concept. I know I have to redo the foot and arms but yeah. Rough so far and I will ink later on.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y208/roxxychan/Image1.jpg

Tell me what cha think what I need to add?

[Bronze-Dragonrider]

I think it looks wonderful :D Personally, I imagined Zainal to have wide cheekbones but a more elongated face, and very big oval eyes. Just kinda more 'alien' looking. But that's just my mental image of him. Not sure how it fits in with Canon, I haven't read the Freedom books in awhile.

[spellwight]

Very nice, except the face. Zainal's a 30+ year old man, not a 12 year old boy. :D

[AnnMarie]

The lines are great, but I didn't see Z has that bulky?

[Bronze-Dragonrider]

The lines are great, but I didn't see Z has that bulky?
Well Zainal WAS from a heavy gravity planet, so they'd need to be big and bulky for that. I was thinking the legs could use even a bit more...

[Lily]

Very good. But I also don't think Zainal looks "alien" enough - and his feet are VERY big!!!

Now from a female point of view!!!!! Kris is VERY small in comparison - I visualise her as a much bigger build than that - OK, Zainal is what? 6'10" or so? But Kris was 5"10" wasnt she? She would come up to his shoulder at least and be more solid in build

Well, that's just the way I visualise her

You're very talented JinJin

[jinnjinn]

Thankyou so much you guys X3. I hardly ever get critiques so yes this feels great to me! Only way I can improve and all.

Yeah the face did come out too young, I will try and redo it and hope that the paper can servive another rubbing *wink* Okay so the legs need to be a little more chunky you think and narrow the chest slightly? Any more suggestions?

[jinnjinn]

Thankyou Lily^^

I will add that in . Hopefully my next picture I can get it closer to everyone's liking ^^. Never though that it would be this much fun and with everyone helping and adding their suggestions too ^0^v

[Lily]

Jinnjinn!!!! don't forget you can never please everyone!!

[jinnjinn]

I know I know ~~;

but I do want to try very hard on getting at lest a good pic of zainal up for everyone.

[Lily]

Look forward to seeing it - and I love your siggy!!!!

[jinnjinn]

Hehe ^^ Thankyou *hugs*

[Jax]

Very cool Jinn :D look forward to seeing the next installment :ok:

[Weyrwoman Kalina]

I agree, it does look very good!!

But I also agree that Zainal doesn't look... well... 'alien' enough. And Kris is a bit small... sure, everyone can seem small when compared to Zainal, but not that small ;)

Excellent job!!! :applause:

[Myaah]

Well, I don’t know the characters, but the drawings are quite cool.
I’d like to see how the final drawing came about, it’s really nice (well, okay, that’s not a very productive post but I do like your style a lot ^^; )

[jinnjinn]

Thankyou so much for all the comments!!!