Neou's 'Broken Mirror'

[Bronze-Dragonrider]

I think it's a really good poem, great structure and emotion. Very good work, though it makes me sad hearing someone say that about themselves.

:hugs: :applause: :group:

[C_ris]

It is a great poem! Real emotion! The thought hat it must have taken to bring so much out in so few words must have been huge!

[Priscilla]

I agree with both of you. Very well written, Neou! And, I can understand the emotion behind it as well. I might also interpret the mirror as being not just a physical mirror on the wall, but the mirror in which we "look" when people say things to us like "you did a good job" or "you have a way with words", and part of us refuses to believe them, not being willing to see what they see in the mirror of our souls! So, I say, good work Neou, for giving us something that made us think! :ok: