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Jay_Quessir
26th July 2005, 07:19 AM
And it felt so good
And it felt so right
Emotions were high
When I slammed it in his face that night
Slammed the door that night....

(Piano with Guitar accompanyment that fades to piano then silence)

It had been building a long time
And I finally broke the dam
My feeligs were hurt
but he hadn't given a damn

For so many years
I endured the tears
But I finally didn't cry
Cause he pushed me too far
That night

And it felt so good
And it felt so right
Emotions were high
When I slammed it in his face that night
Slammed the door that night....

I hope he's learned his lesson
I hope he bled for what he did
I hope he sees me different
I hope his tears shed too
I hope he'll finally listen
When I tell him good-bye
I hope he'll finally see
I only wish that he would die

And it felt so good
And it felt so right
Emotions were high
When I slammed it in his face that night
Slammed the door that night.

I know he'll finally see
That different side of me
I'm more terrible
than his worst dream

And he finally knows
The pain I have seen
IT's all his fault
He's so damn mean
But not anymore
Cause I slammed that door
Over and over and over and over and over and

And it felt so good
And it felt so right
Emotions were high
When I slammed it in his face that night
Slammed the door that night....

Over and over and over and over and then
He finally left me alone...

Priscilla
26th July 2005, 03:13 PM
Wow, Silver. I hope things are better now. That would make a good song though, with the right music! ;)

Keita
26th July 2005, 03:24 PM
That is really good SilverJay! :good: :hugs:

Jay_Quessir
27th July 2005, 06:52 AM
Thank ye!