Feedback for: What is this planet anyway?

[Brenda]

I really like this story! I can't wait to see what happens next! I do have a problem though - I can't believe they wouldn't be able to get visuals of the surface, to see that there were still humans there. Even if they had to send a probe rather than just scan (I can just see it zooming past Fandarel!) they should be able to SEE what's down there, once the preliminary scans are done. Maybe they do the scan for refined metals so they can tell where the caves are, but then there's so much that shouldn't be there that they do a visual scan which is harder, takes more power (something reasonble so they would wait to use it unless it was necessary.) Just a thought. Even with that discrepancy, I really like it so far!

[thedragoneth]

Yeah, well, they don't have any probes, I guess. My spacefaring science isn't all that strong! :O Could we change the title of this thread to the name of the story: What is this planet anyway?

Yay, the second chapter is up!
Are the characters too weird? I'll try to put in more description as I go along.

[Shazza's Back]

More please.

[Brenda]

Yeah, someone posted a comment in the story thread so I went and reread - I'd forgotten about this one! It still has a lot of potential...

This bit made me LOL, though..."Ooh, like the Qwertyuiops of Asfda VII?"

[GinnyStar]

What is this planet anyway? Feedback: More please. I ejoyed it very much. Someone may have something in the middle of an idea, but that OK I know it not right. I have done that before I knew where to go with my own feedback. Keep it up. :D One place to try to blend in.