Feedback for Firebird by Something Evil

[Mayhem]

Thais gave me cold shivers. It's just so creepy, and leaving it on an unknown ending really gave it that 'something'

Sorry I can't be more constructive, but I loves it anyway!

[Bane]

I love it! How dark and mysterious.

But I don't think it ended in an unknown. I think she died and the black eyes and claws were of the tempest that had come for her and the dragon...

Just my opinion.

[Brenda]

Sorry, but the constant use of "..." rather than any other punctuation... was very distracting... and made it so the pauses were all the same... whether it would normally have a period... or a comma...