Poetry from a tired mind at 5 am

[Weyrwoman Kalina]

I would like your feedback on the poems here (http://annemccaffreyfans.org/forum/showthread.php?t=5829), if you'd so like to oblige. I wrote them both at about 5:00 am when I couldn't sleep, so they're... interesting.

LoL

[Bronze-Dragonrider]

You should write at the wee hours more often! :D These are VERY good poems, feelings are expressed so openly in a flowing way, and the way you word everything is just simply beautiful. I can't wait to hear more from you! :applause:

[Weyrwoman Kalina]

You should write at the wee hours more often! :D These are VERY good poems, feelings are expressed so openly in a flowing way, and the way you word everything is just simply beautiful. I can't wait to hear more from you! :applause:


Wow... really? Thank you! Often times when the mind isn't so focused better poetry can appear... and it was dark... I don't know why but I seem to feel less restricted when it's dark.

:shrug:

But I will continue to write! Thank you for feed back!