one of my poems for 'A Threat Unforseen'

[Bamy]

Faith my beautiful golden queen
how lovely you doth grow
you're larger than the biggest green
and much stronger as you know
you were th first to take to flight
of all your hatching mates
and soon you will begin to fly
against the thread you hate
together you and i will fly
in the wing of golden queens
and all thread will be charred to dust
as we work as a team.

[Bamy]

Wobbling Egg,

Shuddering Egg,

On the heated sands.

Cracking Egg,

Crunching Egg,

Dragons humming sounds.

Hatchling living in the egg,

Desperate to get out,

To search for its new life-mate

Standing on the grounds without.

Impression will occur,

To the candidate of choice,

To the sound of dragons humming

And the cry of loving voice.

[Bamy]

Dragon rider soar,

Dragon rider fly,

Search out a candidate

Who will honour my

Hatching little daughter,

A queen of sun-bright gold,

She needs a woman who is strong

And loving, who will mold

Her into a great queen

Who’ll fly high to be the best,

So search her out and now be quick,

For the golden egg won’t rest.

[Bamy]

these are the poems that head (or will head) each of the chapters in my story which is posted in the FFF. i would like feedback if at all possible to both poems and storythe top poem will be for chapter three, the middle one heads chapter two and the bottom one heads chapter one.